In this modern day and age, technology development allows people to transact through bank accounts. While some people are in favor of that it is beneficial to citizens, I partly agree with this accelerating trend for some reasons.
On the one hand, cashless transaction has it own set of limitations. Firstly, due to the fact that there are a large number of existing bank accounts, it seems extremely hard to manage. Thus, criminals can take advantage of security hole to deceive and rob people of money. Secondly, this kind of payment is not really suitable for some people such as the elderly. The old are likely to have difficulty in using it owning to lack of technological competency. As a result, this type of transaction brings about various inconvenience and danger.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that money banking is a useful mean of transferring. First and foremost, it is truly quick to transact through bank account with only a click, thus you can save plenty of time and money, especially in this hustle and bustle life. Moreover, it provides users with clear information avout transactions, receivers, balance account, which help people to update properly. For example, it is more ideal to put aside money in bank account than keep your property by cash archieve in the safe at home to be sure of keeping track of savings regularly. As a consequence, this sort of payment is increasingly favourable to people.
In conclusion, cashless paying has both rerits and demerits, but the advantages can outweigh to some extent. Hence, people should obtain adequate related information and seriously take it into consideration whether it is the best choice for them or not.
- Nowadays there is a growing shift towards the use of cashless transactions While some people argue in support of a cashless society claiming that it is beneficial to citizens others raise concerns about security To what extent do you agree or disagree Use 73
- Nowadays there is a growing shift towards the use of cashless transactions While some people argue in support of a cashless society claiming that it is beneficial to citizens others raise concerns about security To what extent do you agree or disagree Use 84
- Nowadays there is a growing shift towards the use of cashless transactions While some people argue in support of a cashless society claiming that it is beneficial to citizens others raise concerns about security To what extent do you agree or disagree Use 56
- Nowadays there is a growing shift towards the use of cashless transactions While some people argue in support of a cashless society claiming that it is beneficial to citizens others raise concerns about security To what extent do you agree or disagree Use 89
- Nowadays there is a growing shift towards the use of cashless transactions While some people argue in support of a cashless society claiming that it is beneficial to citizens others raise concerns about security To what extent do you agree or disagree Use 67
In this modern day of…
In this modern day of technology development, cashless transaction has become a popular way of transferring money. Whereas advantages raise agreement among cashless society, others cas doubts on its insecurity. Given is the essay discussing and explainations my opinion.
To begin with, the flexibility and convenience of cashless transaction has faccilitated people’s lives. With a smart phone and few manual acts, ther is no need for a person to carry a huge amount of money and be able to send or receive money quickly. Therefore, the situation of being stolen or getting lost of money is eliminated and gie the user a comfortable sense when doing transaction. Secondly, online means of tranferring has a system which save any information about the latest and even furthest to help them to keep track with transacting money. Besides that, this history allow people to calculate and inform with their counterparts in business.
On the other hand, transaction without cashs still has unxepected drawbacks. The popular phenomenon ther appeared among the elderly group. Old peole, in particular, who don’t understand thoroughly and unable to keep up with the modern technology, will find it hard to manipulate onlien. Moreover, there are more and more hackers who play tricks on them which easily leads to lost information and money.
In conclusion, cashless transaction also has it two side eddects, thus, users had better apply in careful ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98233215548 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84114321965 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628975265018 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9093029738 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173472235972 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575291585647 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453273176013 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107000059756 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356741583516 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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