In 21 Century,Mostly people spend time with job sector main reason is increase in personal demand. It is hard nowadays to survive in one person income only so, both masculine and feminine are now spending time at work than with their children and increase social problems involving young people mind.This essay shall discuss both the view before reaching a personal opinion.
Being in cut-,throat, compitive world were every walk to get good,glad,not only but also luxury life. However,mostly people are related to working sector to give glad and comfortable life to children.For instance: From past time by 50 per cent job sector increase their construction in the development of job opporunities to people because women and men both are working.
A part of these, Parents are not spending there time with children this fact increase social problems like emotionaly, mentaly, dipression, rude behaviour and so on. While, parents are onlt giving importants to their professional work then family. Parents not sharing their achievements, and life experience with child and not asking child problems,goals, idea about their life.
To sum up, i agree with both statements eventhrough parents need to spend minmum 30 minutes with children.Hence, it is primary responsibility of the parents's and children should also share their problem with each other
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, while, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37264150943 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9730417747 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2705148427 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.375 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322106289818 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133308927417 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651879934025 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186378202602 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529845906338 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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