Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. Has this been a positive or negative development?
The development of technology has been increasing dramatically nowadays. So, the method many people connect has modified. While there were a lot of contrast ideas about positive and negative affected, but I supposed that it still has two aspects.
The first is the benefit of communication with each other. The main reason is every person can connect easily. For example, you have foreign friends, you can't fly there and come back, because it spends too much money and time. The way resolved this problem is the connection by the network. Besides, you can send some stickers to express your emotion when chatting with people.
However, there some negative about it. Technology is used too much by people for a long time, which leads to they don't want to have a face to face conversation. Today, almost a person does not like to hang out with their friends or play activities outdoor even they don't care about everything expected to focus on the phone.
In conclusion, the development of technology always has two opposite aspects.
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, so, still, while, for example, i suppose, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 174.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95402298851 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59146336819 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67816091954 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4927694513 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8333333333 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252185110946 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838750484172 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581838076438 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132272853734 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517641268971 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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