There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In today’s world of science and technology, more and more people have been working and studying from home since telecommunication technology is now easy to access and more affordable. From my point of view, I believe that there are some obvious advantages of this trend but its drawbacks are also undeniable.
On the one hand, I completely agree that utilizing the Internet in remote working and studying is easy and can bring effectiveness. Firstly, working and studying from home provide people with a comfortable working environment and flexible schedule since employees and students can work anytime that is suitable for them. Besides, this way of working also help reduce traveling cost, time and thus, avoid wasting time and traffic congestion. Secondly, with the aids of telecommunication technology, we are now able to work in some of the hardest situations. Taking the coronavirus disaster in 2020 as a prime example, in some Western countries, almost every social activity like sport, entertainment, education,… must be temporarily postponed but people can still work and study in a new normal way thank this advanced technology.
On the other hand, I am also convinced that without being used in an appropriate way, this technology can also cause negative effects. Firstly, for people who are lack self-discipline, home-based working is certainly an ineffective approach since without being supervised, they may usually be distracted by their phones or computers easily and thus, they can hardly finish anything. Secondly, it is scientifically proved that attending virtual classes can bring negative impacts on students’ interpersonal skills. Therefore, many parents decided to let their kids learn in traditional classes which can offer them many opportunities for socializing.
In conclusion, while I concur that taking advance of telecommunication technology in home-based working is absolutely convenient and effective, the disadvantages of this development are still irrefutable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59868421053 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27073610697 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595394736842 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1962455221 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.833333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273356239826 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093439683371 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112410148129 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180481764674 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121750519507 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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