Advertisements have gained a significant popularity amongst the society. Big companies take help of adverts to increase the sales dramatically. Advertisements can be effective only if they are realistic and cast real life heroes in it. It is a positive developement as it brings economical and employement benefits for the society which will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are mainly two factors which makes an advertisement more powerful. First, it should comprises of real facts without any deceiving purpose. Because there are no other ways to check the authenticity of the product, advert is the only option. For instance, a product called fair and lovely is a brand which does not fulfill what commits in the ad. It is considered as cheating with public and they fall in a trap and waste their hard earned money. Hence, this cannot be called as an effective advertisement. Second, organisations can endorse a real life hero to enhance the value of the advertisement provided that the quality of the product is not compromised. People believe on them and buy products which will eventually boost the profit. Take Sachin Tendulkar as an example promotes a health related product, people will definitely purchase and recommend it to others.
There are several factors which makes it a positive development for the society. To commence with, advertisements provide economical benefits and improves the GDP of the country. Increasing sales has a direct connection with profit as it also rapidly increases which enables the companies to pay more tax and contribute in the growth of the nation. In addition, it enhances the employement rate as it brings plethora of job opportunities for thousands of people. For instance, a recent study demonstrated that employement has been increased by 32% with a increase in sales. Therefore, it is beneficial for both; the society and individuals.
To conclude, advertisement is definitely advantageous for the communiy in order to provide employement and monetary benefits as long as they are authentic and does not hold any falsifying facts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'comprise'
Suggestion: comprise
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24778761062 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09948514356 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545722713864 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6708564517 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.95 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.95 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211358263067 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618841854105 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490724202713 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124726655208 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341250675181 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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