The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
it is often argued that if people should comply with the conventional rules succeed from the past or just throw off the old-fashioned ideas. From my perspective, the new generation should establish our own living styles without a definite doubt of what older people told us.
On the one hand, traditional opinions may be wiser sometimes. even some proverbs have educated us repeatedly before blindly trying something popular, one needs a calm time for calculating the influence that the things will exert on his life. The new does not always mean the better. The empirical formula figured from the older's rich experience is precious as it warns the conceal holes we are more likely to encounter in our future road.
On the other hand, schemes for modern life naturally lead to transformations, especially with regards to taking the old clothes off. people may feel safe under the shield of old rules, but in the case of that, creativity can't grow up normally. For example, adults are always pushed to marriage whether they are ready to begin a two-person stage. Parents may get worried if we just resist and struggle to focus more on our own careers other than an intimate relationship. personally speaking, it is nonsense that society calls for individuals to marry after age in law. Every single person has the right to select the time and even the gender of his partner, rather than merely conform to the thoughts of the older generation.
In my view, the younger should choose a new way to go while half-taking the suggestions after a precise selection.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, even so, for example, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92830188679 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64815874694 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671698113208 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8083152427 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152049278403 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445981378437 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438000379178 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852823933157 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449375044731 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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