One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Discussions regarding mortality have always been highly debatable in various societies around the world. The fact that the average life length is constantly growing is driven by the development of the modern healthcare system. Although lifespan extension is supposed to be a major culprit of overpopulation which is clearly a drawback, I believe that the benefits implied by the constant enhancement of medical services are more important.
On the one hand, the increased life cycle provokes the accumulation of people populating the Earth. This is because elderly people who used to naturally pass away at a certain age in the past are now enjoying longer lives, which, when accompanied by the dramatically growing number of human beings born each year, is creating additional burden on our planet. Moreover, the problem of extensive population entails more negative aspects such as the resources scarcity, which, in its turn, appears to be a cause of danger for other species inhabiting the world. For example, in 2016 United Nations reported that the lack of water entailed by uncontrollable birth rate in some African communities also affected the animals that lost some of their regular water sources.
On the other hand, the achievements of medical care allow regular people to better realize the beauties of their lives and enjoy the company of their families. Proceeding from this, due to the average lifespan extension senior citizens are now able to spend more time with their children and grandchildren. Moreover, this is not only making old people happier but also appears to be a major indicator of life quality as such. For instance, the latest rating prepared by the US National Bureau of Statistics was using life expectancy as one of their three most significant indicators for evaluation of life quality among countries.
In conclusion, even though the arguments against the enlarged life expectancy also look persuasive, I am convinced that the positive aspects of medical progress prevail over the negative ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28923076923 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8056578509 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.6857839164 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.25 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176077165098 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621012580402 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540552119569 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952766342379 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472855947258 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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