One of the major problems facing the world today is the growing number of refugees. The developed nations in the world should tackle this problem by taking in more refugees. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
It is very well stated that in recent times the proportion of refugees have had undergone a drastic surge and therefore, is considered as one of the major issues to be addressed. This encourages many to propose that well to do nations can assist to resolve the respective growing trend by letting in majority of the refugees in the country. The following composition justifies my cent percent agreement to the idea with relevant examples.
Primarily, one of the prominent reasons is the recovery of identity lost in wars due to race, cast and creed. This imposes many repercussions when the people living in enemy countries are denied nationalities due to mentioned reasons after certain differences. for example, many Indians living in Bangladesh are ordered exit from the land after being declared as a separate nations after late 1990s. This poses a helping responsibility on Indian administration to let live Bangladeshi Indians in India with an Indian identity till date.
Secondly, in comparison to other under developed or developing nations like Bangladesh or Nagaland, the economy of flourished nations alike India bears far more potential to serve additional percentage of people along with its current citizenry. This is transparently reflected through GDP ratios the respective countries. This being the fact can demand developed countries to permit immigrants in greater proportion in comparison to nations having less flowered economy. For an instance, every year about more than 15% of Naga people opt for immigration to India for either purposes like employment.
To conclude, in my opinion it can be thus digested that the developed nations if entertain injection of refugees to their land can greatly assist trim the growing number of people entitling no any citizenship round the globe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31010452962 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91466278303 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7679704024 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21398951451 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733477236258 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509071102624 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126466914365 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385817156772 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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