The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments
on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is true to say that stricter punishments should be implemented to minimise considerably accidents in order to defence drivers and others. However there is an argument that officers are able to issue other lesser serious fine ways to warning and caution drivers from disobey consistently national regulations.
The world has been witnessing the remarkable rise of death and injuries for accidents and it is recorded by every countries in single day, especially in holidays and occasions. there are variety of reasons causing for accidents such as: drunk, doze off, neglect in driving or even in some situations, the driver tries to raise speed and move to wrong lane for being faster. In consequences, police officers have obligation to seize driver license, write the bill, take the car way and worse, put the offenders to the jail. Depend on culture and differ governments, each countries also have their own disciplines which is considered extremely serious: no more driving for a period or serve in the social centres and certain years as a prisoners.
Nevertheless, the majority of communities reject that they not only approve above punishments because it has been happening but also they ask government should take action to prevent injurious accidents from occurrence by install camera over the roads, detective strange behaviours in driving and stop them to keep moving immediately rather then cold penalties, especially on highway or residential areas. road safety also inclusive mechanical accidents during road or building constructions which inevitably attack to drivers on the track somehow. Authority officials should conduct regularly training regarding of Labor safety law and monitor such construction companies could not violent the law.
Apparently, I prefer our government should educate and keep warning driving offenders about damage to people to execute heavy penalties to them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46621621622 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84294103573 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665540540541 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2204696915 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.8 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.089231170381 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335656709307 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230278234031 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0485527421558 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204091817392 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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