The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education, or shopping.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern civilization, the issue of how the increasing amount of traffic influenced human life has grown a spark of controversies among citizens. Some people suppose that the only method to reduce the number of vehicles in urban areas today is by minimizing the demand for traveling to work, education as well as entertainment. However, there involves manifold alternative approaches to alleviate this issue occurring in somewhat circumstances such as academic and social activities.
Initially, the amount of traffic turns out to be diminished considerably when carrying out the strategy to perform daily activities at home instead of working outside. More specifically, thanks to the technological advancement and the availability of the internet, citizens nowadays are transparently easier to freely do everything at their own house including work, educational, and recreational purposes. Thus, not only could residents decrease the number of vehicles existing by cutting off the demand for daily activities, but the environment is also maintained and protected from being contaminated by those exhaust released every single day.
Besides, the importance of applying those educated and socialized activities should not be underestimated in general contributing to make a decrease in the use of traffic. Dominantly, it is assumed to be a practical and effective way to teach youngsters in protecting the environment by limiting to commute by vehicles through the educational curriculum. Hence, these young generations are stimulated as well as encouraged profoundly to travel more frequently via public transportation. Furthermore, local authorities should create and establish some environmental campaigns for dwellers to participate in defending the atmosphere in almost all cities.
All of this being indicated, even though the reduction of necessities for work, education, and entertainment as well could conduct in somewhat instances, people would still appreciate the effectiveness of accomplishing other beneficial movements such as in schools and even in society. Whether the activities would achieve promising results or not, both government and each individual are making a massive effort to uphold the environment significantly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, thus, well, as to, in general, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82674772036 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37923939312 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632218844985 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.2383574567 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.75 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216852299091 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662897760308 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708510089701 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117539405164 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528232677407 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.69 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.83 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.78 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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