Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that the capacity of the universities to accept students, should be roughly divided between males and females. I strongly disagree
The number of male students who wants to continue their education is not equivalent to the female student. It could have many reasons like the differences between the population of men and women, the social acceptance and the traits of various majors. For instance, an especial major like mining engineering has higher demand among males than females. If the capacity of different gender was the same it would be a virtue for girls to be accepted. Girls would have less rivals to surpass, but boys have to compete for less opportunities. therefore, considering equal capacity for male and female intensify the inequity between different gender.
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According to this, universities should accept students regardless their gender by considering their abilities and ambitions. In my opinion, the vision of equity between male and female should be declared precisely to lead the society to a fairer place.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31360946746 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74784387944 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.5219256125 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.7777777778 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224787783662 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937630180915 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785797611819 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168044487536 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268258873281 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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