Outdoor recreation such as mountain climbing, camping and hiking bring us closer to nature and are ideal activities to encourage family bonding. Discuss.
What will you do if you have a day off with your family? Some will spend their holiday gathering around and have a meal or playing together. Other indulge in outdoor activities such as climbing or camping. For me, I strongly believe that outdoor recreation can bring people closer to nature and enhance family bonding.
On the one hand, when participate in outdoor activities, we have opportunities to know more about wildlife. Visiting natural or historical preserves give us more knowledge while camping or hiking give us experiences. Moreover, activities like biking or climbing help to increase our physical strength. In other words, taking part in such activities make us more healthy. Not only our health can be improved but our mind can relax too. Especially, it teaches young people to appreciate and protect the environment.
On the other hand, ourdoor recreational activities bond family together. During trip, family members has chance to take care of each other, which could help encourage unity, love and caring from one’s nearest and dearest. Indeed, most people today are stick to the screen for many reasons, from work to entertainment, which lead to less communication between family members. And all that outdoor activities can do is unplug them, to make them feel less stress and pressure and bring them closer.
In conclusion, bring people closer to Mother Nature and family bonding is two most important merits of outdoor recreation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21186440678 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67749674067 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656779661017 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0387897374 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353417552992 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106193678949 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907069546667 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206123384026 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325137187598 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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