Tuorism is becoming a good source of revenue to many country. Discuss the advantanges and disavantages of exploiting this resource.
Today, tourism remarkable contributor to many country's economic development. In Vietnam, this sector has drawn about billions dollar in foreign direct invetsment and domestic investment. Though noone can deny beneficial effects that tourism bring about, there are still a lot of its disadvantages that should not be overlooked.
On the one hand, we can clearly see some positive influence of tourism. Probably, bringing a substantial profit is the main advantages of tourism and the reason why it has been promoted so much. The income generated can make up a significant proportion of both private, local and national incomes. As a result, the authority can use that income to invest in infrastructure such as roads, rail networks or educational facilities. Meanwhile, tuorism can provide much-needed employment for people. As of now, there are endless job opportunities for the youth in travel agencies, tour operations, hotel managements, transport officers and more. Tourism has expected to be a promising strategy to decreasing unemployment rate in any nations. Besides, tourism gives the locality a chance to show itself off and raise its profile in the world. It also allow people to know more about each places' history and culture. This then generates understanding amongst various types of people and can help to encourage lasting economic, political and social relationships.
On the other hand, tourism still carries some problems. Firstly, tourism can often cause environmental damage with risk, namely eroision, pollution, natural habitats loss. Ancient buildings, monuments and temples are struggle to cope with increased traffic and suffer inevitable wear-and-tear. Reefs and other naturral tourist attractions can suffer permanent damage. In fact, local traditions with rich cultural heritage are reduce to wearing costumes and putting on acts for thw tourists in return for money. In other words, the commercialization of culture undermine the soul of a tourist destination. Moreover, some tourists often lack respect for local traditions and culture, refuse to follow local dress standards, get drunk in public or behave rudely or inappropriately towards locals, which can lead to unnecessary conflict between the indegenous and tourists. For this reason, it can leave a poor impression on people who has never been to those places.
To conclude, it is certainly true that international tourism benefits national economies. However, its downside such as environmental deterioration and increased risk of conflicts between locals and tourists cannot be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'allows'?
Suggestion: allows
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'habitats'' or 'habitat's'?
Suggestion: habitats'; habitat's
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...ditions with rich cultural heritage are reduce to wearing costumes and putting on acts...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, while, in fact, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2196.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61636828645 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05318574783 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4289464982 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4782608696 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65217391304 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0367071182589 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0121057606521 0.084324248473 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263332564775 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0263670159499 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276033510708 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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