Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
People from different part of country want to migrate to urban areas for different opportunities. This lead to the problem of over population in urban areas. Traffic jam, pollution, unemployment are the major problem of overpopulation. In this essay, we discuss on the problem and solution of overpopulation.
In the begin, people migrate from rural to urban area for different opportunity and dreaming of better life. This may cause the serious problem of over population in one city or area. Traffic Jam, pollution and lack of job are the major problem causing by over population nowadays. For example, due to the more population in Kathmandu, it becoming hard to find job as except or competition level is very high. At the same time, you can face the traffic jam than other cities in Kathmandu. Everyone have to visit Kathmandu to make their work done, like, better job, for government work, to make passport, for abroad and etc. This bring the pollution in the city area and harm the public health.
However, we cannot only blame the people for all this problems. Government also need to make policies to reduce the problems of urban areas. For intense, government need to enforce the law of diversity. All the development and facilities must be allocated to all part of the country on equal basis, that all resident can enjoy all type of facilities on their place. This equal diversion of development and facilities also help to create employment in their home place. People also must be aware of government policies and pressure them to make policies on the favor of public.
In conclusion, people migrate to urban area for opportunities and facilities but, government should make equal policies to every part of the people and give equal opportunity to every resident. This lead to the solution of over population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, as for, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98039215686 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76010525913 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8174353494 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2105263158 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52631578947 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164451841933 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609930579181 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630621555468 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105844813207 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437093334445 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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