Parents are trying to reach childcare tutors to learn how to take care of their children. Is this essential? Give your opinion on this and illustrate an example.
Raising children has engendered some valid concerns with some people who have just become fathers and mothers without experience. Therefore, parents are inclined to find a tutor, who offers raising children skills, to learn and cultivate childcare skills. To a certain extent, I agree that it may be necessary for different situations. However, I also believe that the parents could possibly take care of their children well without renting a tutor.
There are some compelling reasons why parents reach childcare tutors. Firstly, parents would be well-trained to cultivate their childcare skills and understand children's demands to provide an environment which is conducive to children’s development. Moreover, a suitable environment would affect their physical and mental health with the increase in personality. As the result, the family bond gets tighter with strong solidarity. For instance, in a family which has more raising children knowledge, their kids seem happier than the others whose parents are lacked experience
However, the tutorial services are quite expensive to some families whose financial status cannot afford the expenses. With the inexorable development of the internet, besides learning from tutors, there are many sources for the unwealthy parents to reach such as e-learning, social media, or even their parents, who are experienced in taking care of children. These measurements not only help a family to save up a lot of money but also cramp much useful knowledge.
In conclusion, childcare tutors may be essential for some families with financial abundance. However, there are still many methods which are not only saving but also useful. Therefore, depending on each family's demands and circumstances, they would have a different choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...owever, I also believe that the parents could possibly take care of their children well withou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59409594096 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80322852576 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608856088561 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5239619046 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216178450119 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075035875401 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748813159881 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130579781663 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482637665723 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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