Since the beginning, education has played a vital role in defining an individual’s career and personal growth. Due to the rising joblessness and inflation, a number of people keep an opinion of providing kids with just basic education and not pursuing it further because of the reason that they will not get any employment in future. I do not agree with this idea and I will support my opinion with valid examples.
Firstly, the aim of going to school must not be associated with employment only because it not only grooms pupils' personalities but nevertheless provide them with basic general knowledge of things and their surroundings. In addition to this, with just primary learning, only basic occupations are available like cleaner and helper or driver and these jobs are considered to have low pay, health benefits and other perks. Hence, youngsters must have a chance to enrol themselves in the required schools, colleges and as well as universities.
Furthermore, with the rising competition in the corporate sector, they need certificates and degrees to get to the desired workplace successfully. For example, if a person doesn’t have any proof of his education, how he is going to convince the employer? Being moderately or highly educated, brings you a better occupation, attractive pay, outclass insurance and promotions along with potential future opportunities to grow further.
To conclude, this is a very outdated thought that unemployment will rise in the coming time. In any case, children must get learning facilities and should not be pressurized for jobs.
- In some countries unemployment is high so some people think that children should only go to primary school and not to secondary school because they will not be able to find jobs in the future To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people think zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed However some people think zoos can help protect the rare animals Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- In some countries unemployment is high so some people think that children should only go to primary school and not to secondary school because they will not be able to find jobs in the future To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Many employers believe that good social skills are as important as good qualifications to succeed in a job so they are employing people who are with good social skills To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Parents are trying to reach childcare tutors to learn how to take care of their children Is this essential Give your opinion on this and illustrate an example 83
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, so, well, for example, in addition, as well as, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25590551181 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98812673055 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641732283465 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7352551556 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.363636364 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167014851249 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552565204772 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380169207753 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939005678115 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130480319307 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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