In some countries unemployment is high, so some people think that children should only go to primary school and not to secondary school because they will not be able to find jobs in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree？
There are some compelling reason why students should keep studying. Fristly, The employers would give precedence to employees with qualifications instead of the uneducated ones. This can be explained by the fact that certificate is similar to a testament to your ability. Having a degree would offer more jobs opportunities, which stand a chance of having a better life. The primary leavers could possibly seek for a few feasible entry-level jobs such as cleaner or domestic worker. For instance, in America, the educated people are inclined to have a high-paying job more than blue-collar workers.
Secondly, schooling would benefit for children’s career. School provide a competitive environment which is conducive to kids’ developments with full attention of teachers, not only growing their personality but also rising the teenagers’ behavioral awareness. Moreover, schooling allows children with general basic knowledge for life and surroundings. It also helps to cultivate practical skill, which is attributed to physical interaction in school with friends such as collaborative skills, communication skills.
In conclusion, the secondary education may benefit the children’s future more than some people think, which supply more job opportunities, contributing to the higher living standard
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 392, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...ving a better life. The primary leavers could possibly seek for a few feasible entry-level job...
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'provides'.
Suggestion: provides
...d benefit for children’s career. School provide a competitive environment which is cond...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntributing to the higher living standard
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87958115183 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19955693048 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.706806282723 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7180330442 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.090909091 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194740095033 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673393602867 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458068314159 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12991664769 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288019776137 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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