Some people think zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, some people think zoos can help protect the rare animals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
In the era of technological advances and the developments of humanitarian organizations, the wildlife has become as a topic of general interest. People have differing views about whether to close the zoo or not. A school of thought holds that zoos are guilty and it should be close in order to protect the animals, while others believe that zoos play a pivotal role in preserving wild animals. Personally, I would argue that the shortcomings of zoos pale in comparison with the benefits.
On the one hand, there are some justification that zoos would have a tool on wildlife. First of all, wild animals are captured in cage and have no freedom in living as well as hunting. Once wild animals get release out and comeback to nature, they could not adapt the alien environment and lose their wild skills such as hunting and fighting for food. Moreover, these animals would die because of the lack of food.
On the other hand, it is absurd to downplay the importance of zoo as it has also brought many benefits to wild animals, which are contributed to the conservation of wild animals, which are on the brick of extinction. Taking care and capturing these animals in cage are in the interests of safety, to prevent these animals from nature, which is rife of dangers. This might be explained by the fact that the humankind’s relentless pursuit of money has come at the expense of wildlife. For instance, the rhino horn has gained traction as the benefits it brings for human life, so there were numerous movements in chasing and killing rhinos just to get profit from their horns.
In my opinion, the disadvantages of zoos pale in comparison with its advantages. As the environment has become alarming contaminated, in which is no longer conducive for endangered to live, let alone the closing of zoos could dispense with cruelty.
In conclusion, there is no denying that zoo still has impacts on species; however, the benefits it brings for life are more enormous than the shortcomings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89442815249 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76272171931 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536656891496 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8265831434 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.266666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7333333333 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237582536871 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080874327704 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661921775916 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125274640187 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656745759901 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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