in the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in heir area. what do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?
As we know, a large number of people currently have tendency to moving from the countrysides to cities where everything is more state-of-the-art. this essay will discuss about the benefits and drawbacks of living in a small settlement.
On the bright side, people can get on well with neighbors in the village so they also learn social skills. For instance, children always have chance to play or experience with others. By means of chatting and sharing, they never feel lonely. What's more, the living costs are cheaper than that in the city. Almost all of goods are reasonable price which helps villagers live on an easier conditions. Another main reason is people won't need to worried about some alarming problems like traffic congestion, exhaust fumes, polluted environment because of so few cars there. It's why the countryside has nearly zero emissions. this make sure about health for inhabitants.
However, settle down in small community isn't completely beneficial, there're some negative aspects that should be taken into consideration. Firstly, the facilities and infrastructures in the countryside are not as good as in the city. Many schools, buildings, hospitals, workplaces are invested to provide the best thing for humans. people can have better chance in education and care-taking. Secondly, young people must face up to the absence of jobs. The percentage of unemployments have been rising because there isn't enough office to do. Then they will have difficulty in developing economic or enhance living's quality. From my perspective, the advantages of living in small community is greater than the disadvantages.Peple perchance have less money but they can live in peace, quiet and harmony. Especially, they will always be surrounded by their neighborhoods who will lend a hand to them under any circumstances.
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- in the past most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else nowadays most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in heir area what do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small communi 56
- in the past most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else nowadays most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in heir area what do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small communi 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0213292505 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668965517241 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.207843896 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8947368421 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2631578947 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244376708921 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607630622138 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534321579653 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170854570727 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306730160298 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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