In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?
These days, more and more people tend to go shopping as a leisure activity, rather than a simple household task as in the past. In my opinion, I strongly believe that this is a positive change and will support my standpoint in this essay.
To commence with, going shopping on ocassion can be seen as an effective method of relaxation. Shopping allows people to be indulged in the world filled with attractive material goods, which ease their eyes and their mind. As a result, they are able to relieve the stress and depression of their workload and daily burdens. For example, teenagers often choose to visit a clothes store on the weekend or after stressful examiniations to entertain themselves and get rid of the previous worry and tension of the exam time. Moreover, being able to buy their all- time favourite dress will bring them a great sense of achievement and satisfaction.
Furthermore, sometimes, shopping is more an opportunity for people to spend time with their family and friends than just buying material goods. People enjoy taking their family out and hanging out with their friends on the weekend or some special occasions, in which case shopping malls will be a great choice. They can go along the shopping centres, choose clothes for each other and buy some food for the lunch while having some talk on the way. In this way, they will enjoy a period of relaxing time with their beloved ones, which contributes to strenthening the bonds among themselves.
To conclude, I can say in affirmative that going shopping regularly as a hobby serves people as a means of entertainment, and at the same time, cements the relationship of people with their family and friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cements the relationship of people with their family and friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, so, then, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87152777778 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64179071081 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552083333333 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1695120766 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.916666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117264773262 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473113196234 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399736619945 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910546967167 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470016249975 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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