People are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can be done to reduce sugary drink consumption?
In recent times, consumption of sugary drinks has increased, especially among adolescents. Within the scope of this writing, an attempt will be made to look at reasons and propose some resolutions.
One of the major causes is that there's so much soft drink marketing that it's cause high consumption that's primarily targeted at children and teenagers. This leads to a lot of health problems like obesity and diabetes. The remedy for this situation is that governments should levy a high tax on sugary drinks or run awareness campaigns about the negative effects of such drinks. In addition, it is possible to put health warning labels on the bottles to reduce consumption.
Another reason for the usage sugar-based drinks is that it gives a feeling of quenching thirst, refreshing when drinking and creating a sense of appetite when eating, making more people love this drink. Moreover, there is an addictive ingredient that is caffeine, so combined with the high amount of sugar in soft drinks will form a mixture that makes people's mood better and wants to use them many times a day and any occasion. To solve this problem people need to reduce their daily needs and gradually give them up.
In conclusion, although there are several problems of this trend, marketing is still the main cause and high tax on this drink is still the best solution in these days and ages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, still, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92274678112 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56096258313 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630901287554 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7122809398 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.7 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259875576823 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904323603348 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787271979177 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13646680443 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739292198074 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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