People are never satisfied and always want more.
In what ways is this a good thing and in what ways is this a bad thing?
There is some dispute whether human's unending satisfaction is a negative or positive factor for the development of our world. This phenomenon has both merits and downsides which will be elaborated below.
On the one hand, human's strive for better experience holds the key to improvement in many aspects of life. From economc perspective, it motivates workers enhance productivity and efficiency in workplaces which in turn boosts national outputs and raises citizen's material life and posperity of countries. From societal viewpoint, attempts to improve components of welfare and medicare has led to better well-being and longer lifespan of people. This gives individuals a sense of security and joyment.
Finally, given the advent of internet and advanced transport system, private life has witnessed significant surge in convenience and comfort. With the internet, people now let their fingers do the walking, consumers are able to make purchases and learners could study online. Similarly, state-of-the-art public transportation system allows passengers can travel at ease these days.
Conversely, there are disadvantages associated with humankind's thirst for growth namely destruction of the environment and social evils. Rapid expansion of human beings' population has resulted in depletion of natural resources include fossil fuel, water, and place a great amount of flora and fauna at risk of distinction. This acts as precedessors for damage of habitable land and pollution of the ecosystem. More importantly, unequal distribution of income between those have and have not is the main culprit of crimes in any society. This is because the less well-off who are stripped of oppoturnities to receive more lucrative income may feel desparated and end up committing criminal behaviors.
In the light of these facts, humankind's tendency to be greedy is of primary importance for flourishment in many fields of our world, albeit there are pitfalls related to the human's instinct. I believe that the benefits of this characteristic bring more merits than risks.
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- The best way to solve the world s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- There is a growing recognition that young individuals tend to be impacted by same aged people I believe that the merits from the phenomenon would overshadow its drawbacks 56
- As transport and accommodation problems are increasing in many cities governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 84
- Companies use major sporting events to promote their products Some people think it has a negative effect on sport in general To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 163, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
... social evils. Rapid expansion of human beings population has resulted in depletion of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, if, may, similarly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53797468354 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02570703479 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683544303797 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5229487451 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.375 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0860160015657 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299245100619 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394186054894 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0442695201891 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021097372473 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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