People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
In today’s modern era, more and more young people decide to embark on higher education for a host of compelling reasons. Many believe that this environment allows them to widen their horizon and gain new experiences. Personally, I opine that by attending higher education, people will have better job opportunities and apart from this, they can improve their social skills and many other life skills.
More young people are now pursuing university or college as a way to prepare for their future occupation. It is indisputable that employers often have a tendency to seek for employees who are bachelor’s degree holders as they argue that those people will surely have ample intrinsic knowledge to handle difficult tasks. Therefore, for most students, higher education together with a degree can open the door to better career prospects. For instance, a person who graduated from a prestigious university might be given a more lucrative job compared to the one who has not acquired a tertiary degree.
In addition, universities or colleges not only provide attendances with academic knowledge but also help them to hone practical skills. Most higher education institutions have a multitude of clubs and organizations that students can take part in to improve their social skills as these environments often give them a chance to meet more talented people coming from different cultures across the world. To elucidate, students in Foreign Trade University, which is one of the top-tier universities in Vietnam, are known as well-rounded educated students for their excellent academic performance and more importantly, their life skills such as time management and problem - solving skill as they usually participate in some school’s events and undergo lots of school’s training sessions besides studying.
In brief, each person has their own purposes when attending higher education. And I think that two overarching goals are having better career preparation and gaining new soft skills.
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Suggestion: Higher
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... known as well-rounded educated students for their excellent academic performance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, i think, in addition, in brief, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43269230769 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87478161628 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599358974359 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.0263303748 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.25 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257400605034 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100264770169 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629271801643 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155030186376 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407394205505 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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