People in the community can buy cheaper products nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In the present time, it is true that people can easily possess a product at such a pretty low cost. While this seemingly might have some benefits for individuals to reap, I believe that there also lies potential downsides needed considering.
On the one hand, customers can greatly benefit from the decrease in price of most products these days. To begin with, cheaper goods can help people’s living standards to turn for the better. Looking back a few years ago, the money needed to purchase an item such as a vacuum, used to be much higher than that at the present, which prevented many shoppers from obtaining it. Nevertheless, that is not the case anymore, individuals now can buy most products necessary at their demands. Additionally, lower-price goods at the same time intrigue more consumption, which means the national economy can also be boosted as a consequence.
On the other hand, buyers’ ability to obtain products at a lower price might underlie several unwanted drawbacks. Firstly, the decrease in price might mean the degradation in quality of an item. This accordingly urges people to buy more and more goods as a way to replace the one which has been worn out. What is more, conspicuous consumption, as a result of cheaper production, has taken a toll on the environment. Take fast fashion as an example. Lots of clothes are mass produced to meet individuals’ needs, which generates tons of trash detrimental to the surroundings.
In conclusion, although inexpensive items offer customers more choices of products, this may result in more demerits than merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, look, may, nevertheless, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07224334601 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85845084408 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627376425856 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4255187861 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14649176517 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531145571216 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574590171574 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804277822276 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545959582085 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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