people living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. what are those problems? should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Nowadays, the increasing population has raised the level of migration to other regions or countries. As it is noticed that, the majority of the developed countries are seeking for a job due to the overpopulation in a country. it might be effective to cope with acquiring jobs for the younger generation.
As far as, there many notable benefits and also setbacks with people living in metropolitan cities. Firstly, the overcrowded population has ruins the problems in accommodation facilities such as independent villas, houses, and apartments. Several citizens are tackling for construction area in limited land spaces in big cities. However, builders and civil engineers are constructing apartment to a large extent. Secondly, other problems were notable by an immigration lawyer that 75 % of the young generation have been rapidly moving to get a better life. Whereas, the main problem for people residing in big cities likely to face the high cost of living. this may lead to encourage an individual to migrate to suburb areas.
On the other hand, governments should motivate people to move to other regions or towns. Owing to, higher prices of additional commodities like housing rates, transportation costs, and even food. Whilst, the inhabitants of countries has to pay higher than the smaller town. Furthermore, environmental pollution has an increasing tendency from factories and vehicles. this issue may cause a respiratory disease especially lung cancer which may shorten the people's life expectancy. Therefore, the government has to find a solution to move people to a smaller town from larger cities. Although, the government should encourage the residential by providing various kinds of facilities likewise improvement in small towns, moving factories, education sectors as universities and colleges to the suburbs as well as developing the transport system which interconnects to town or cities. it has been considered to be one of the best solutions. Thus, to do this the government should consider the policies and investment at an affordable cost for such development in smaller regions.
In conclusion, I believe that merits much to be more beneficial for the development of smaller regions than detrimental aspects of urban areas. As the government will be authorized to generate new policies and the right likelihood to move residentials from the urban cities to smaller regions. In this foreseeable future, the possibility of getting good to outsource to an individual with a well standard of living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44696969697 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08663018166 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5380665214 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0454545455 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.04545454545 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279352320936 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661458909748 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696977932716 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135089402542 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978938114213 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.