fossil fuel are the main source of energy around the world. However, people are being encouraged to use alternative energy sources such as wind energy, solar energy and so on. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Why?
fossil fuel is the main element of generating energy in the world. In this modern era, populations have been progressing steadily across the globe. due to that, pollution has raised the margin level. Apart from that, fossil fuel has been involved in environmental problems.
To begin with, fossil fuel has become the conceptualized industrialization area, where the surrounding areas were inculcated to stop the environmental crisis. Owing to that, many nations are discouraging fossil fuel instead of using other alternative energy sources such as wind energy, solar energy, and additional sources. Hence, this potential factor of using alternative sources are a beneficial outcome to save environmental problems. Certain numbers of nations are implementing alternative energy to save plants and animal life. I believed that wind and solar energy are an optimistic impact to prevent air pollution and respiratory diseases or asthma.
On the other hand, alternative energy sources are highly demanded and some bordering countries could not able to consume energy sources. due to that, energy consumption cost has immense in consuming from supply and demand forces of renewable energy. As a result, the rise in energy consumption has likely increased the growth and also the economic impact of the countries. In contrast, the huge process of burning fossil fuel as created carbon dioxide. Consequently, it finally contributes to global warming. However, it would lead to climate change. In my point of view, fossil fuel has become the determination to avoid saving in pollution. solar and wind energy produce electricity and which could help to improve the economy.
In a nutshell, global warming has caused by various aspects of fossil fuel energy. I believe that, in this foreseeable future, alternative sources will be much beneficial to save the lives and fewer pollutant areas. I think it would be a positive development from green energy generates renewable sources like solar and wind energy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, hence, however, if, so, apart from, i think, in contrast, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42628205128 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90154575776 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548076923077 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7894584153 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.65 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438350809998 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120636767481 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102473340272 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268359964626 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709262068911 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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