People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life.
What are these problems?
Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
City population size has risen at an unprecedented speed in recent years due to the urbanization. Some people are of the opinion that city dwellers have to confront various problems, which I believe should lead the government to encourage people to move to the regional area.
There are numerous problems that city dwellers struggle to handle though I believe that overpopulation is one of the greatest ones because it results in many serious living respects such as poverty or crime. Due to the large population, a high and rising unemployment rate alongside with high living costs forces a part of the citizen into poverty. As proof, of the 49.3 million Americans working part-time, 11.4% live below the poverty line closely in line with the 11.8% overall poverty rate. In long term, people cannot break out of the vicious cycle of poverty and they commit crimes as a way of making living. Shoplifting or pickpocketing gains popularity. Additionally, serious crimes such as robbery or murder pose a dangerous threat to society. As a result, people living in large cities may not have a sense of safety and security.
I am of the idea that citizens should be encouraged to relocate to satellite cities. This can solve the aforementioned problems simultaneously. Should people move away from metropolises, the population in these cities will be declined, leading to reducing pressure on several problems like unemployment, traffic congestion and other social issues. In addition, the government should invest more money in town infrastructure and facilities to attract more and more dwellers.
In conclusion, overpopulation is amongst the most serious problems facing city residents nowadays, and personally relocate people to other areas to live seems to be possible solutions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30281690141 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98926864605 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3613473422 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342077639221 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962814447366 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816357589816 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197316777826 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349848782794 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.