People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
It is argued that city-dwellers in enormous cities cope with a lot of issues in daily life. The reason for this may be pollution and traffic jam. Needless to say, government should lure people to move to smaller towns in order to settle down.
To commence with, it has been widely demonstrated that pollution is the main reason that inhabitants have to deal with. In large cities, it is undoubted that there are numerous vehicles, which release a lot of pollutants such as gas, emission into the air and environment. This results in a far-reaching consequence to people’s health. Furthermor, city-dwellers have lived in big cities encountering a difficulty in transport in the light of traffic congestion. In reality, population density in large cities is extremely high, hence, in rush hours, triggering traffic jam. For instance, hanoi city, about five-seven p.m, wokers and employees from companies have difficulty in going back home because of congested traffic.
Additionally, government strives to persuade people move to other cities that is in vicinity of large cities. At first, in the hope of balance related to per capita income. Obviously, people have lived in outskirts may have lower revenue than that have lived in large cities, for this reason, government aspires to balance the standard life of people nationwide. It is evident that this is also results in bridging the gap between the wealthy and the poor. Secondly, moving to smaller cities may help inhabitants to reduce deseases. For example, a newspaper in VietNam, conducted a servey about the rate of lung cancer, the rate in big cities is about 10 percent higher than that in countryside. This is a persuasive reason that authorities always lure people to move smaller cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12543554007 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83388168524 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543554006969 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6613196795 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236748815587 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079968345191 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809214937681 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175045714851 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629679687193 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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