people now a days work hard to buy more things. This has made our life generally more comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialism. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
It is undeniable fact that in 21st century people work hard to make their life more ease than ever before. My opinion will decide with some argued and explanations in following paragraphs.
Out of several reasons, the main cause is people want social status between their peers and that is why they go on way to such materialism. After that, they consciously or unconsciously kill our traditional values. Because people believe that if they don't have newest gadgets and branded clothes then they shall not get respect from their relatives and peers. Therefore they work hard to carry out that kind of facilities. Consequently, people lead to materialism and lost their inherited values.
However, I would not overlook the other side. It is certainly true that all people don't do work hard to get luxuries lifestyle. There are so many successful people who keep up a good balance between their work and culture. They spend enough time for their profession and their ethics and norms.
Finally, I pen down recapitulation that extreme quest for materials creates imbalances in our moral & social lives and thus brings ruin to our conventional values and principles.
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: have the newest
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13020833333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68171632712 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697916666667 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.444032309 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0833333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174084343073 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601059504626 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407866748242 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968483726625 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028002392969 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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