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People nowadays send text messages more frequently than they talk the phone.

In this day and age, people have a great tendency to send text messages rather making phone calls. Though there are several drawbacks regarding this action, I strongly believe that the benefits when using messages to communicate with others are more noticeable. This essay will first demonstrate that talking through phones makes call receivers feel it is wasting of time, followed by a discussion of texting messages; conversely, saving time and money, even the improvement of writing style.
One outstanding disadvantage is that people allocate their time to carry out other activities instead of receiving other phone calls and talking for a period of time. Notwithstanding when using phones to make conversations, people can express feelings and emotions if they get any negative emotions as they are facing troubles or difficulties even positive consequences. Moreover, the usage of phone calls boosts the sense of enjoyment. It helps people for escaping to have a tedious conversation, then put their minds in a better mood. For instance, women householders call their friends to tell them all about things they have to go through to seek advice or sympathy and after that, they can relieve stress to be able to go on with anything in front of them. However, making phone calls need to spend a vast amount of time to express enough emotions, so people tend to ignore and not receive other phone calls.
However, the aforementioned drawback can be overshadowed by a variety of advantages regarding texting messages. First and foremost, the merit of texting messages outweighs phone calls since it saves time and cost-saving. In case you want to convey something to others, it just needs to give a short time to make a text by paying a little charge. In some countries, sending messages gains huge popularity among many folks and becomes more and more prevalent in society. In addition, when typing a piece of message, electrical devices on your phone or computer will help edit text automatically, check grammar and spelling; as a result, your writing style will be improved, and message receivers can understand enough of the information you want to send them.
Overall, sending messages is a very positive tendency because people can take the advantage of it to save up money and time or even the development of literacy.
For example, people who are studying how to write in English can practice by typing messages to partners in order to acquaintance with words, structures can be corrected by automatical devices, and your mates also check for your writing.
As it can be concluded that the disadvantage of talking to the phone with others may seem minuscule when compared to communication by texting messages. However, not overusing it, and still, balancing the two means of communication can help you have a good conversation with others. But, anyway, I do think that to some extent, using messages has more benefits than ever.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ing other phone calls and talking for a period of time. Notwithstanding when using phones to m...
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Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mes more and more prevalent in society. In addition, when typing a piece of messag...
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Line 3, column 635, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...heck grammar and spelling; as a result, your writing style will be improved, and mes...
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Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...your mates also check for your writing. As it can be concluded that the disadvanta...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, conversely, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2468.0 1615.20841683 153% => OK
No of words: 485.0 315.596192385 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08865979381 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82029147437 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531958762887 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 782.1 506.74238477 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.642608894 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.894736842 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5263157895 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316692255877 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100495300946 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575235843954 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158275191752 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586861051377 0.056905535591 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, conversely, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments