Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is argued that the death penalty is necessary since it helps to increase the level or security as well as reducing violent crimes in a country. I personally disapprove of this statement because of some main reasons.
To begin with, executing prisoners may encourage revenge which leads to a violent culture. Particularly, giving criminals a capital punishment would deliver a message to victims’ family and others that they should pay a heavy price instead of being reformed. In some cases, after being released from a prison, the criminal is murdered by one of victims’ family members. This person who suffers from the death of their loved one now becomes a killer. Clearly, this fine could not tackle the root of the problem.
Despite this consequence, some people still claim that the death penalty is important as it is useful to decrease the number of violent crimes as well as offences. However, I strongly believe that its role is not as crucial as they argue since numerous countries in the world could maintain a low rate of crimes even though they do not apply this measure. Take Sweden as an example, this nation does not approve the death penalty because they believe prisoners could rehabilitate and they should be given a chance to change. As a result, the number of people committing crime has dropped significantly. In contrast, although China uses the capital punishment for many criminals, it has not successfully increased the level of security. It seems that citizens in countries that death penalty is not applied may feel more secure due to a decrease in violent prisoners.
In conclusion, I disagree with the opinion that capital punishment is essential as it could create a violent culture where people are encouraged to revenge as well as this method would not solve efficiently the origin of problems and reduce crime rate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...in of problems and reduce crime rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, still, well, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, as well as, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02572347267 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67388043554 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543408360129 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5121948908 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.642857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231172530807 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742359115491 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540649797845 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148500996912 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451609982862 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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