People think that robots are very important to human’s future development, while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have divergent opinions with regards to whether robots’ development is prominent for humans in the future. While some people suppose that they are dangerous and have more adverse impacts on society, I strongly believe that it would be more beneficial to apply robots into humans’ life in the future.
A growing body of research suggests that robots play an integral role in humans’ life in the coming twenty years. This means that people will be learnt how to control robots and prompt them to be more beneficial in their life. Not only do robots help people to solve numerous small tasks but they also are a visual assistant for. Individuals only need to manage the robot system or tackle problems which are related to the robot’s inside. Taking Japan as an example, some robots are set up in many restaurants to test the effective rate of applying robots as a companion of people in the future. It is true that robots can be higher exact than people.
On the other hand, there are some adverse effects which should be taken into consideration. An ever-increasing number of robots in the future could decline the number of jobs which have belonged to people in the past. The more people are unemployed the more social maladies they cause. The governments and competent authorities will face a series of crime problems and the quality of society can be reduced.
In conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that robots will cause the unemployed phenomenon, I strongly support that if there are robots, people can lessen immensely the amount of work which they have to do.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...A growing body of research suggests that robots play an integral role in humans’ ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87179487179 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51895895863 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545787545788 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8198301548 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.307692308 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238342473099 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885898493193 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488405795609 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157444118776 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464427051642 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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