It is common in today's society that several internet websites and social networking keep the personal data of individuals. While some believe there are clear advantages to this trend, I am firm of the opinion that the drawbacks are more significant.
It is clear that the data of individuals by the net website could be beneficial for a lot these days. Firstly, in the modern world, the internet would save data users to bring convenience. In fact, if a person forgets to address their house, they just need to go to the help center and they will be given the information. Moreover, these electronic media use customer data to make their services convenient and flexible. For instance, the latest press report by Google states that they use customer data to improve their services.
Turning to the other side of the argument, I am firmly of the opinion that the drawbacks are significant outweighing the benefits. One reason is that social media could leak information about users. Indeed, people register personal information for illegal online status, they would have their information stolen and disrupt the customers' lives. More importantly, the data could be used for payments made by others.
To sum up, although most people can keep ìnformation by holding the website are widely used, I consider that the advantages of this phenomenon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06756756757 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70687740642 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585585585586 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7999784668 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.75 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120410192129 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423685725166 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306061208758 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780283305652 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270034303362 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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