Polygamy has lead to massive divorce rate around the globe. Give possible solution and discuss the reasons behind the issue?
Polygamy is the custom of having more than one wife and husband at the same time. It is undoubtely the case of polygamy which is also affecting the society adversely. In this essay, I will examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some of the practical policies that authorities could implement to reduce the problem of polygamy.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons why is this happening. The first and foremost reason is discrimination between male and female about the education background. In addition, there are always some misunderstandings with each other because of difference in education; that is why they do not make a proper bond. Apart from this, there is no satisfication between them due to the racism. A survey is conducted by Hindustan Times where 6 out of 10 people are those who give divorce due to difference in education system. It is probably solved by the government if they implement strict laws regarding the discrimination.
Moving further, the one of the main reason is the government rules for the community. The rules are always make by the government for the safety of the people as well as profit for the country. Furthermore, people have to follow these rules because if they do not follow these rules; they will get punished by the government. A good illustration of this is the Pakistan where government give rights to their citizen that they can do three marriages because the population of this country is too low. It is solved by the authority if they make some new rules instead of making these type of rules beacuse it also become the cause of the divorce.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem, given the complexity of its causes. However, one option is that government should make some strict laws where the people cannot do more than one marriage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, well, apart from, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86624203822 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73338218133 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515923566879 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2518796461 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.077260994652 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278378676462 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261145753218 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0505766534566 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286373441702 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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