At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of oler people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In contemporary era of cut-throat competition, countries are moving forward to achieve their economic goals. Some people believes that these days there are a large population of young adults as compared to old citizens in some countries. I personally opine that the merits of this situation outweigh the demerits.
To commence with, first and the foremost is that there is an increase in the economic growth of the countries. As more young adults means more young potential with new ideas, creativity and deep technical knowledge. This will help the country to develop worldwide in every field and increase the global value. For instance, a recent launch of Chandrayan by ISRO scientists provide the recognition across the globe to our country.
Furthermore, less old citizens implies that there is less requirements of medical facilities given to them. Government can save money from this and use it to for the development in the countries. Government can use these funds to provide free education, vocational training skills and many more.
On the contrary, more number of educational institutes are required to provide education to the children. But, nowadays due to large population universities are not providing required practical knowledge to them which makes it difficult for them to find jobs which ultimately leads to unemployment.
To recapitulate the given points, even though an increasing number of young adults causes problem for educational institutes, yet I believe that it will take countries towards the bright future. As it will surge the economic growth of countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41035856574 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91454345968 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585657370518 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7532942204 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173303246163 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542407373045 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526733649603 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923613534217 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627952452679 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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