At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that the situation of population of many nations are imbalance, that means the number of youth are higher than elderly. While it has some drawbacks, the benefits of this situation bring for the development of country is bigger.
On the one hand, the imbalance in the popolation in terms of ages bring about some disadvantages. Firstly, the number of older people decrease lead to lack of the experience people to developed countries. In orther words, elderly people who have both knowleged and skill that are two conditions play a vital role to contribute a country. There are many problems that young people cannot tackle because they do not have as much as experience like older people. Secondly, a nation have a large of young adult will suffer the increase in demand of education. Young people invariably have high demand in studying because learning is one of the best way help them have better life in the future. Therefore, the increase in the figure for youth lead the government have to take responsibility invest money in develop the quality of education to ensure bring a good condition for young people.
On the other hand, the numbr of young people go up will have more perks for country. Firstly, young people who are in the age of working, hence if nation have numerous of the youth, they will have a perfect market labour where have many people can work to create profits that contribute in developing economic. In addition, economic expansion will help country have position and competitive advantage when compare with other nations. Secondly, there are decrease in the number of elderly make a chance for authorities can save money in terms of health system. For example, older people in Vietnam always need a careful in take care of their health and money spend for this will be paid by gorvernment. Therefore, it is a big advantage for authorities in reduce the amount of money in healthcare for older people and spend that money in develop counry.
In conclusion, although a large number of younf people will create some disadvantages, the benefits this situation bring for the economic growth is bigger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 25, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...evelop counry. In conclusion, although a large number of younf people will create some disadvant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89531680441 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60993369699 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473829201102 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3480462685 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0625 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235440169433 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088595467414 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517847850292 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1724855114 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271936520576 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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