Prevention is better than cure. Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is a widely held view among people that building health awareness and knowledge is far more important than treating patients in terms of medical budget. I am totally of the opinion that prevention should have dominion over treatment.
In my opinion, government ought to spend more money on changing their citizens’ concerns about health problems. For example, in primary schools, children who have been taught general understandings about their well-being stand a better chance in preventing regular sickness and ailment such as cold, fever and even obesity. Additionally, in developed countries, the proportion of people suffering from insurmountable diseases tends to be far more lower than developing and poor ones. These positive tendencies are attributable to the fact that their citizens are entitled to take part in annual seminars organized by the most prestigious experts from a variety of health fields.
On the other hand, preventing sickness is not necessarily expensive. In fact, it is financially reasonable and can be executed on a daily basis by everyone. Some kind of vaccines are inevitably expensive on account of their scarcity, therefore, government could pay great attention to this aspects in order to have viable deterrents to these diseases. However, human beings would have a lower likelihood of involving in the majority of sickness in form of balanced diets and healthy lifestyle. According to dietitians and nutritionists, consuming lemon juice and turmeric as well as taking up regular exercise can enhance your immune system and increase our ability to fight cancer, rather than splurging a great deal of money on curing this chronically traumatic disease.
To conclude, I believe that higher percentage of money from government should be spent on raising social awareness about adopting a wholesome lifestyle to protest against illness instead of finding methods and new technologies to cure victims.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'lower' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: lower
...insurmountable diseases tends to be far more lower than developing and poor ones. These po...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...government could pay great attention to this aspects in order to have viable deterre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in fact, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4950166113 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95393865523 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65780730897 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3865456281 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.833333333 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20012590056 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661409230304 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314771092209 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11275837233 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396152420226 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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