Q With the increase global demand in oil and gas undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources To what extent do you agree

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...t industrialisation era. However, while i believe they are important for the life...
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... important for the lifestyle humans lead , i strongly believe that we should searc...
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...umption. With regards to individuals , the impact of oil and gas has had on ea...
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...ual person has clear advantages. Firstly , people all over world are using these f...
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...g these fossil fuels to power their cars , aeroplane , trains , etc. and make thei...
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...il fuels to power their cars , aeroplane , trains , etc. and make their travelling...
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...to power their cars , aeroplane , trains , etc. and make their travelling experien...
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...dity for the functioning of our industry , which in turn produce consumer as well ...
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...ds for consumption. On the other hand , the effect that oil and gas have on the...
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...rreversible in the long run. Furthermore , when consumed these fuels have harmful ...
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...els have harmful byproducts such as, NOx Nitrogen oxide and CO2 Carbon dioxide wh...
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...e different types of health complexities Lung cancer , Tumour , underdevelopment ...
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...pes of health complexities Lung cancer , Tumour , underdevelopment of brain in h...
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...alth complexities Lung cancer , Tumour , underdevelopment of brain in human bein...
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...nderdevelopment of brain in human beings , they also result in increasing global t...
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...l warming. Consequently, this phenomenon global warming has already reached its p...
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...bal warming has already reached its peak , researchers predict if no concrete step...
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...e world towards reducing cardon emission , the situation can become irreversible a...
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...t in natural calamities such as Tsunamis ,droughts , etc ; they in turn can result...
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...al calamities such as Tsunamis ,droughts , etc ; they in turn can result in extinc...
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...as have benefitted human kind as a whole , they simply have started to have a nega...
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... such as electricity, hydrogen, nitrogen Do not have harmful by products should ...
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...itrogen Do not have harmful by products should replace oil and gases , it is nec...
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...y products should replace oil and gases , it is necessary for thag rather than se...
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...these fossil fuels in undiscovered areas , we should collectively move toward clea...
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... should collectively move toward cleaner alternate resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, such as, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4983277592 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11642677087 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632107023411 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.3421250214 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.454545455 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2727272727 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181438250859 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661446389126 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313354306297 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102170213917 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110617434761 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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