With the increased global demand for oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
With the growth in population along with rapid urbanization, the requirement of non-renewable sources, such as oil and gas, is in a sudden bloom. Exploration of undiscovered areas of the world to feed the growing demand of resources has been a burning issue around the globe, as people tend to argue against the exploitation of land for resources while some find it to be the only possible alternative to estinguish the demand. I strongly beileve that exploitation of undiscovered land for fuel shouldn’t be allowed, which is discussed in the preceeding paragraphs.
Natural resources are our prized posessions, which are diminishing day to day due to the unquenching human-greed for resources. With rapid destruction and desertification of lands open to the public, there are few areas which remain undiscovered. If opened for mining for resources, the fate of these regions is inevitably in grave danger. Moreover, the destruction of these resources in turn hampers people’s life, as seen through the growing natural calamaties and global warming triggred by the events of destruction.
Furthermore, the demand of energy if grows in the current pace would deminish the existing resources, incuding the ones in the regions curently out of reach, in less than a decade. The oil and gas reserves in earth are limited, while the rate of consumption of energy currently exceeds the rate of formation of these resources. Thus, the limited resources in preservation even when allowed for mining would last for only a small period of time. Various research highlight the requirement for the shift of paradigm to renewable sources adressing the issue of diminishing resources rather than destructing available resouces in the search of more.
Weighing all the aspects, destructing land and limited resources left to quench the growing demand would only bring negative impacts to the world, so the access to the unexplored areas for the search of resources should be prohinited in my opinion. The use of renewable sources as an alternative might aid the growing demand of energy.
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...might aid the growing demand of energy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, while, as for, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24924924925 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02745599706 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534534534535 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.8770840391 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.461538462 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279981430542 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906029897019 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535119672453 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167630886896 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557794003345 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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