Qualities that make someone admirable
Personally, I find that we all have at least one unique trait that is admirable and worth learning. Admirable is the feeling of liking and appreciating a person with good qualities. And the admirable person may be a successful person, a talented person, but they can also be a normal person with a kind heart or a person who bravely overcomes adversity. So, learning the qualities of an admirable person helps us to learn and improve ourselves.
First of all, bravery is one of the important human qualities worthy of praise. It does not mean being brave in battle but brave in everyday life. They are strong, resilient to overcome difficulties and never let adversity prevent them from achieving success. When there is a grievance in life that no one speaks up, they will stand up for justice or somehow help those in difficult circumstances that no one wants to help.
Humility is another quality that makes an admirable person. No one likes to show off, and everyone appreciates people who are humble about their talents and accomplishments. Humble people don't show off their talents, they just strive through each day to get better. For example, many doctors have devoted and sacrificed a lot in treating Covid 19 patients today, but what they want is for everyone being healthy, not to praise or brag about their achievements.
Last but not least, an admirable person must be an optimist who has a positive energy that spreads to everyone in any situation. They think the best things can happen and hope for it even when it is not likely to happen. When people fall into a harsh life or encounter failure in something, instead of thinking pessimistically and blaming themselves, they choose to think more optimistically, they aim for the good things to stay with them.So, the admirable person must first find positivity in life and bring it to other people.
In conclusion, when a person deserves to be admired, the should have qualities such as bravery, humility, optimistic,... Knowing about these qualities help us to learn and enhance ourself, they also drive us toward achieving a beautiful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93557422969 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76570610158 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563025210084 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5036597205 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.647058824 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154545212713 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664340872793 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972383131738 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862117551947 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385658253784 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.