Today many parents force their children to study all kinds of courses in their early age. What are the reasons behind this. What effects do you think this practice would bring to the children
Today's society is constantly developing in all aspects, leading to an increasing demand for human qualifications. many students are forced to not only study hard, but also attend and active in extracurricular activities to create a good resume and secure a good job in the future. but for that very reason, parents often demand too much of their children and cause their children affected.
To begin with,the main reason for this trend is that parents want their children highly competitive and stand out in any course. In fact, most parents believe that having good knowledge, intelligent mind and capable of executing multiple skills will make it easier for their children to get the best things in life. and a prestigious career. In addition, parents often observe other children and begin to compare with their own children. Jealousy makes them want their child to be superior to other children, then they force their kids to learn different skills and courses that kids don't really interest.
For parents, there’s no greater pride in knowing that their children are the most outstanding in their class and then later having a best career. The positive consequence is children can be smarter and increased understanding, and be skillful in many things. this definitely good for their future life. However, forcing children to study can cause counterproductive results, since they’ll feel uncomfortable and stressful when they have to spend their all time for studying and homework. also, to become outstanding children they have to cost their childhood and lost their inherent innocence and joy. Along with that, children cannot do what hobbies they really want and having no opportunity to pursue their dream will make them frustrated and depressed, this inhibits their growth and can turn them negatively about life.
In conclusion, motivating children to learn new things help them become a good person, and being knowledgable and skillful also help them overcome difficulties in life. but, they also have their own limit, they need space and time to grow and enjoy their childhood, so parents should consider to force their kids learn too much, this can be great or somehow this will damage your children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19722222222 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65340306767 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5194561028 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.9375 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356741856521 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131501476129 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700448415258 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234919575289 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410435854599 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.