Reasons to join college
Despite the fact that, colleges or universities have a crucial role to shape the modern world, people join educational institutes for various reasons.I believe that the people go to colleges or universities for new life experiences, career preparation, gaining knowledge etc..
Colleges and universities have a deep impact on many individuals life's. Firstly Colleges or universities are like a stage to show talent or skills, medium to raising abilities to the greatest levels, and learn or acquire new skills. Beacause different types of competitions or tournaments organised by educational institutes to courage and support abilities of students. For example, every years sports events organised by Indian government from district to national level, to support and encourage students. Secondly, people from all over the nation with different background and cultures join colleges or universities, which gives opportunity to see or understand the different culture and understand the view-point of other people.
Apart from that, another reason to attend college or university is to get degree, which is mandatory to get better or high ranked job in reputed companies. Moreover, college or university degree is one way to get increment in salary and designation. Finally, colleges or universities have a certain type of courses or programs, to gain knowledge or skills to chosen field. As an illustration, recently Toronto university launched earth and moon orbit related new program.
To put it in nutshell, I pen down saying that the people's ambition to attend educational institutes is to get or deliver better and secure future.
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| 2023-03-19 | Selena17_ | 61 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50793650794 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03994932312 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599206349206 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3064225745 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.181818182 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239850221967 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772510528771 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642442759839 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120251848016 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706699412727 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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