Reporting of crimes and other kinds of violent news on television and in newspapers can have adverse consquences. This kind of information should be restricted from being shown in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
With the proliferation of technology, news is easily updated by numerous kinds of smart devices. However, there are several majors that people consider whether it is reasonably to be published or not, especially report of crimes as well as other kinds of violent news. A group of individuals believe that data which related to scary content should be prohibited due to its serious consequences. From my point of view, I partly agree of this statement and I will further present my ideas on the following essay.
First and foremost, it is obvious that updating news about crimes and dangerous people can create anxiety and chaos for citizens, which will be chances for wicked people to take advantages . In the advent of life, there are diverse troubles are happening that people scarcely know clearly. Therefore, they can forget their wariness which may be opportunities for crimes to finish their wicked plans. As a results, more and more individuals will have to face up with dangers and cannot live merrily as well as concentrate considerably on working or improving their lives. This status is not only affect negatively to personals but also the society.
On the other hand, publishing officially and widespread information about crimes or other kinds of violent can assist people in obtaining knowledge and skills to protect themselves. When people know exactly about dangers they have to deal with, they will experience methods and try their best to save themselves. Therefore, people can not only help their own but also inspire others to avoid badness. After all, negative problems can be eased and the society would be better developed.
In conclusion, people have rights to know about all problems happening surrounded them. Therefore, to prevent the worst circumstances, the government and the manager of multimedia communications programmes should filter the content as well as the data strictly and carefully to provide the most effective news to dwellers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ces for wicked people to take advantages . In the advent of life, there are divers...
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Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...crimes to finish their wicked plans. As a results, more and more individuals will have to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, after all, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22327044025 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77633242556 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575471698113 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1146397579 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.733333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263827240066 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826990876337 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566941713065 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156159440762 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860254798719 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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