Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
These day, holding online conferences and trainings is becoming an increasingly popular trend among businesses. Although this development may have some disadvantages, personally, I believe that it is an overall positive trend.
There are considerable benefits to conducting online business meetings, discussions and training. First of all, compared to traditional face-to-face meetings, online meetings can make it more convenient for participants because travel time is significantly reduced, which means that members can instantly attend the conference from any places through computers or smartphones connected to internet without traveling to the meeting location. As a result, this could make a great contribution to the boosting of working performance. Secondly, from an economic point of view, virtual discussions are usually relatively cheap to run, they can help companies save a large amount of expense by not having to pay for electricity bill, printed documents, traveling and equipment for organizing offline ones.
On the other hand, there are potential disadvantages to holding online conferences. The first one is that these meetings always require stable internet connection. Therefore, the slow internet connection or computer crashing can cause disruptions, which can reduce comprehension among participants. Another drawback is that people from different time zone probably find it difficult to agree on the time of the conference. For example, there is a 12 hour time difference between Vietnam and the USA, so that it is inconvenient to conduct a meeting between 2 countries at the same time. In particular, sensitive meetings relating to human matters such as grievances, disciplinary action or one-to-one meetings with employees should almost always be held face-to-face.
In conclusion, although the holding online conferences and trainings may bring some notable drawbacks, this trend could result in enormous benefits for businesses such as saving time and money. So that I certainly hold the view that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'These days'?
Suggestion: This day; These days
These day, holding online conferences and trainin...
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Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ers or smartphones connected to internet without traveling to the meeting locatio...
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Line 5, column 514, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tween Vietnam and the USA, so that it is inconvenient to conduct a meeting betwee...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le drawbacks, this trend could result in enormous benefits for businesses such as...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sinesses such as saving time and money. So that I certainly hold the view that the adva...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78501628664 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17828190659 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628664495114 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.030470001 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.857142857 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13429397633 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575904624892 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777515983166 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894961271562 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574054604955 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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