Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The internet has rapidly developed and it could provide children with necessary information to study at home. In my opinion, I somewhat disagree with the idea that going to schools is unnecessary.
On the one hand, I believe that school education are indispensable for children. Firstly, face-to-face interaction with teachers makes transmission of knowledge be more effective than online learning. Teachers can keep pupils concentrate on lectures and fight distractions, besides they can help pupils completely understand lessons by repeating the explanations, even they can give advices when pupils are making mistakes. Therefore, children can avoid failures in subjects. Secondly, schools are good places for children to make friends with others, which is very important to their growth. In the school, they can learn to cooperate with each other, respect everyone through team works. As a result, this equips children with important communication skills and builds their social relationships in the future.
On the other hand, there are understandable reasons why going to schools is deemed no longer necessary. The first reason is that the development of the internet makes it convenient for young people to study at home. They can use smartphones or computers connected to the internet to instantly get necessary information, which would give them flexibility and comfort to boost their academic performance. The second reason is that the internet is for everyone, so that the knowledge is not limited. This means children can easily get lots of useful academic information from several resources via the internet and it is always updated.
In conclusion, although the internet could help children acquire knowledge, schools still play a vital in modern life because children can study more effectively under instruction from teachers and schools are also good places for developing great friendship.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54607508532 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93690716725 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590443686007 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6301739281 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334695858139 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108719878632 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598999653492 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204892097011 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373511300032 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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