Retirement
It’s argued that employee’s retirement age need to be increased significantly. This essay disagrees this statement because they limit a workplace for youth to work and it's not good to change country policy which is based on the life expectancy.
Increasing limit age of retirement affects the number of available jobs. As a result, amount of unemployment among the young people will be raised. However old people have experiences which have been accumulated for a long time, knowledge, a manner in their field, young people have much more energy, productiveness, execute task so quickly and efficiently. Particularly, the productivity of organization might be influenced by those older employees.
Another key point is, every nation has their own retirement system based on the life expectancy. In most of the countries, the age of retirement from 55 to 65. If we raise it in a specific nation from 65 to 70, where life expectancy is 75, there will be only 5 years to make a free time for the rest of the life. So it's kind of unfair for the society. Therefore, my point of view is that those people can do some volunteer job or work as a mentor for the freshmen to support next generation and to share the experience which has been gained during the work life.
In conclusion, this essay disagrees the increment in retirement age of people from the work, because of influence in the job market and social life of old-aged people for rest of their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 564, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88844621514 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90457101023 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573705179283 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3499976197 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.25 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175554027448 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902378097415 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111718889368 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120327075678 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214677608067 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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