With the rise in popularity of the internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Due to a colossal incline in the popularity of online news readers, a global dramatic decline in the number of newspaper readers is making many people believe that soon newspapers will disappear in the future. In my opinion, while reading news online has myriad benefits over paper media which might fade greatly the role of newspapers, according to critics, an important and everlasting role of the newspapers cannot not be run off.
The main reason of considering the certain dominance of virtual news over print media in future is not only the convenience to the readers, but also the cost-effectiveness. By this it means that, a person with a hectic schedule irrespective of his or her location can read newspaper round the clock on the electronic gizmos such as tablets, computers, mobiles and so forth. What is more, even one gets internet at very low data cost or at no cost almost wherever internet is free. Therefore, this tends to make online-news very promising unlike newspapers.
An another advantage is that E-news are up-to-date, fast and more believable as one can get number of news of incidents happened a few hours or minutes ago and the updates related to such news are very rapidly and frequently available unlike newspaper. Furthermore, most of the news on the internet is appealing because of the audio and visual aids, which may make readers, believe more in such news than merely reading majority of texts in the paper media. Hence, this positive side of e-news leads to make it growing more and more in future.
In contrast, some people might think that there are yet many ,those who are either old-aged as well as technological-phobic or adamant to not to get familiar with the online media or have no such means due to unaffordability or unavailability. These people could still rely on the newspapers as the most reliable source of information which has been with them for so long. Thereby, need of newspapers appears to remain always firm.
To conclude, to my mind, though an increasing number of people voraciously reading news online are likely to fade away the significance of newspaper up to great extent, yet it seems to one school of thoughts, online-news can never supersede newspapers completely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: An advantage; Another advantage
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Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, in contrast, such as, as well as, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98138297872 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90420539081 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0987630371 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.076923077 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9230769231 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109611391864 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417819969981 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416797190439 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664253795592 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309729955784 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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