Some people believe that advertisement is useful and informative. Others think it is false and only helps to raise prices. Discuss both views & give your opinion.
In today's competitive world, advertisement has become a significant tool to market a product. Some assert that adverts increase awareness about products amongst people that might help; however, critics argue that the only motive of advertising is to force individuals to buy unnecessarily. In this essay, I am going to discuss both views and provide my support for the former view.
Certainly, those who advocate adverts as useful and informative platform, consider it as a direct approach of companies to acquaint customers with their products, by getting into their minds. This happens due to continuous advertising, which leaves people with no time to think of any other brand but the one whose adverts they have seen constantly. Releasing advertisements of one's company's manufacturings in order to showcase the differences that how their product is better than others, is undoubtedly not only make individuals aware but also aids company to surpass its competitors. Redmi mobile series, for instance, nowadays is one of the leading brands not because of its quality features, in fact due to the way these phones are being advertised creatively to allure buyers.
However, some people who say adverts are of no use, but to hike the price only, might believe that manufacturers generally highlight the brighter side of their respective product so as to promote it. Thus, when viewers come across only positive aspects of that particular item, they eventually end up purchasing something which is not required, regardless of the provided incomplete picture of that product. One such example is Energy drinks, which are advertised as energy booster, whereas many physicians claim that the caffeine present in such drinks blocks Adenosine, byproduct to produce sleepiness, in order to make someone alert or awake for a while. Consequently, being awaken for long further leads to insomnia and nervousness.
To conclude, I think that advertising serves an important role in society by updating individuals' knowledge and boosting company's economy. Nonetheless, blindly buying things without having thorough research can be proved as deceptive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ighter side of their respective product so as to promote it. Thus, when viewers come acr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s blocks Adenosine, byproduct to produce sleepiness, in order to make someone ale...
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Line 5, column 632, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[7]
Message: The word 'someone' in subjunctive clause must be used with a base form of a verb: 'alert'.
Suggestion: alert
...e sleepiness, in order to make someone alert or awake for a while. Consequently, bei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, nonetheless, so, thus, whereas, while, as to, for instance, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43413173653 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92523550521 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664670658683 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5367346675 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.615384615 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196825294478 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594376882612 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490536724761 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109535905857 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562599737859 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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