Rising Sea Levels: Causes and Effects
It is true that the exorable increase in the global temperature and a steady rise in sea level are threatening the survival of humans. In this essay, I will show the dire repercussions of this phenomenon and propose several solutions to deal with these problems.
The foremost issue of global warming and rising sea level is the submergence of homes, especially in coastal areas. This is the major proportion of global population residence and if the sea level rises by the smallest margin, they are forced to flee to other grounds. Rising sea levels could cause the water levels to increase and invade the residential areas thus causing many problems for the locals. Firstly, higher sea levels mean the surge of the father island areas and contaminating water sources. The implication of this is that polluted water will have adverse effects on not only the health of citizens but also the irrigation and farming, eventually leading to a food crisis. Secondly, the relocation would result in substantial economic damage, because people abandon their houses and assets. The tsunami rushing into Japan in 2010 perfectly exemplifies this situation, when millions of people were displaced and thus lost their livelihood. Moreover, due to greenhouse gases and resultant rising sea levels, there is a threat of extinction of a lot of kinds of plants and animals. The presence of salt water triggers the disruption of the ecosystem which results in vanishing a lot of plants. In addition to making a change in the soil and plants, the wildlife on the beaches will be hurt by rapid changes in climate conditions.
Therefore, governments, especially in countries along coastlines, should allocate more funding to building up flood protection to address the aforementioned problems. dams and floodgates must be constructed in some areas that are vulnerable to flooding. Infrastructure should be maintained regularly. Furthermore, scientists should conduct more studies on flooding proofs because people can not afford to leave whenever sea levels rise. In fact, there are many tremendous successes in covering houses with watertight which prevents houses permeating, thus people can shelter in their own houses in the event of flooding.
In conclusion, the consequences of global warming and rising sea level are extremely serious and proposed populations should be taken to combat the impacts of this phenomenon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dams
...to address the aforementioned problems. dams and floodgates must be constructed in s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28459530026 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86752787021 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563968668407 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3935104955 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.444444444 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264047583265 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719028368707 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838285880206 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137758987283 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085979474297 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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