School should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
It is suggested that foreign language should not be a compulsory subject at schools. From my opinion, I totally disagree with this viewpoint due to a myrias of benefits that can be brought in by studing a new language
On the one hand, languages contain more than just vocabularies and grammars, they can open pupils’ minds by their uniqueness like culture or history, which can never be found in their own country. In detail, apart from communication, studying a language also allows children to discover more about the world, broadens their horizon and forms them a holistic viewpoint. For example, by learning English, students gain deeper insights into American life, specifically the way they communicate or the food they eat
On the other hand, being acknowledged about more than only one language is of paramount importance in this globalized world. Because information is written in different languages, so knowing more than one language can assist students in their process of accumulating knowledge. In a long term, this could be significantly helpful for their occupation, because the world is increasingly globalized, the need for people who can speak many languages would be higher. Therefore, the more languages you know, the higher your job opportunity is
To conclude, although many people may not advocate the idea of teaching foreign languages at a must at schoolda. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with this statement not only because of massive advantages can be gained through a language but also the possibility of failing behind colleagues if students are not taught any foreign langue
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be brought in by studing a new language On the one hand, languages contain more ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, apart from, for example, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27307692308 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9184452171 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.6151825733 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.375 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179744393644 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874019603616 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408024687726 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120255564773 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434340955381 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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